Their 'Love'
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He said he adored her sense of independence,
But actually, from her dependence he got his;
He said he admired her strength,
But actually, from her weakening he derived his;
He said he revered her freedom,
But actually, in her blind devotion he felt his;
She said she cherished her own independence,
But she wanted his backbone, to depend on;
She said she relied on her own strength,
But she wanted his support, for her weakness;
She said her nourishment was her own freedom,
But she wanted his will, to surrender hers completely;
And they were said to be in love,
Gazing into each other's eyes...
And I did not know whether to admonish him, or her...
Or probably myself, for not being able to understand...
He said he adored her sense of independence,
But actually, from her dependence he got his;
He said he admired her strength,
But actually, from her weakening he derived his;
He said he revered her freedom,
But actually, in her blind devotion he felt his;
She said she cherished her own independence,
But she wanted his backbone, to depend on;
She said she relied on her own strength,
But she wanted his support, for her weakness;
She said her nourishment was her own freedom,
But she wanted his will, to surrender hers completely;
And they were said to be in love,
Gazing into each other's eyes...
And I did not know whether to admonish him, or her...
Or probably myself, for not being able to understand...
1 Comments:
At 4:52 AM, June 27, 2005, Teens to Toons said…
I liked this a lot... a lot..
It has been some time that a poetry with a sense of un-understanding comes my way...
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